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My try at a sonnet
By hate_doll
You think there's every night to live this way
And remain subtle in the way you stride
Please, give me just a moment to convey
Passion's plea and the bliss it will provide
A chance is in your smile, this dance is a risk
The floor is alive with what could be had
You don't give me any reason to persist
Though you do have a come-hither laugh
Let go of other nights, hold only this one
It is time to strut rather than refuse
Fell the beat and leave your shoes undone
To take this dance or not is yours to choose,
"My stride is subtle and shall stay so
And as to your question, the answer is no."
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© 2006 whitney bash
Comments on "My try at a sonnet"
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On Thursday, July 13, 2006, GreekPhilosopher
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wrote:
Hey Hey Hey Now. That Was Really Good! Loved It! GPhD.
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On Friday, June 2, 2006, Mari
(419) wrote:
your profile reminds me of an anime
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On Friday, June 2, 2006, blue
(1409) wrote:
Damn you and all others that can actually write solid sonnets! I..just..can't..do..it. grr. *snarlyface* "fell the beat..." loved that line! ~b
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On Friday, June 2, 2006, GreekPhilosopher
(156) wrote:
"My stride is subtle" Very Nice. Glad To See You Still Writing! GPhD.
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On Wednesday, May 3, 2006, monalisamarie
(113) wrote:
I love the structure of Shakespearian sonnets and you have pulled this one off with elequence and a level of thought that even Willy himself would enjoy.
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On Tuesday, April 18, 2006, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
Your words seem to flow from a better world, one more beautiful and invigoratingly filled with life.
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