Wrong

By A_Puppet_Show


Before foot of a fool,
throw a flower of deceit,
in his wake the truth;

In a wasteland,
under branch one step away,
a sunray betray principle,
sharp silver dreams speak,
on the edge of a knife;

Slave of time:

Conceived by rot, art!
let the willing dance,
shame will vanish,
on this alter of danger,
least is a knife is a fool,
but a friend but a fool,
but a knife ..

In a wasteland,
under branch one step away,
light on a child .. (work in progress)

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© 2006 Blinded_Tiger
Published on Friday, March 31, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Enigma On Saturday, April 7, 2007, Enigma (91)By person wrote:

    THATS GOOD, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE REST...HAHA I'LL BE CHECKING BACK...:)

  • Solace On Wednesday, April 5, 2006, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    Ok - this is fantastic man - i feel the comma after least should be left out to leave an ambiguity there - i love little puzzly bits like that - but other than that fantastic!

  • Solace On Saturday, April 1, 2006, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    Hope will kill you here, entropy to the breast, a knife on every altar. Can't wait to see this evolve :)

  • darkdesires On Friday, March 31, 2006, darkdesires (139)By person wrote:

    There is a deep beauty that is above my understanding and words. A thought turning piece my friend atleast for me.

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