the returning
By whisperer
hi
i was once
what does it feel?
something deffinately
wolf pelt breaks over rusty knives as the skin warped sarcophygus is opened
white room one red wall and words stabbed everywhere
...i think...
explosion worn from the inside wreckage convulsing burn shredded esophygus
hoarsly whispers out a warning
...and a greeting...
welcome to the wasted lands that were once a garden of roses
sleeping rocks solidified in grudgeless disgrace
mountains fallen, so much noise
walls of ivy surround the ground where once we stood tall
transcending down...breaking through the thought process subasement catacomb
scream engineering room making a home for myself in nothingess
superfluous duress
presumptuous wasnt i
the venom still resides in this husk
expect nothing that was there before
entrenched
inscenced
were you a believer i'd fuckin strike you down
this is the beginning of another end
of course i'm here again
no expectation, no duration just reaching out to touch the end
Comments on "the returning"
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On Monday, February 25, 2008, RubyXero
(484) wrote:
nice ending. strong work
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A former member wrote:
i don't think i ever told you how glad i am that your back, that everything's okay..so, i'm saying it now, truly. i'm very glad you are back, alex. thank you.
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On Friday, January 20, 2006, Rafe
(12) wrote:
so beautifuly deep, like the darkness in those eyes of yours. me likeys. and too, thank you for the sponsor. me have no better brother.
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A former member wrote:
I like how this sort of rolled off the tongue, like one fluid swipe of a sword..and blood's fucking everywhere..dear, dear, dear..you always make a such a lovely mess.
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On Tuesday, January 17, 2006, veingo
(533) wrote:
Can't type. can't speak. Awe! ^V^
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A former member wrote:
"the venom still resides in this husk
expect nothing that was there before
entrenched inscenced"- nice. it's nothing i didn't expect. good write.
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A former member wrote:
p.s. welcome back, darlin.