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I'm A Killer
By veingo
I did it.
I confess.
It was me.
None the less.
I'm not sorry.
For what I've done.
I had planed it.
All along.
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© 2005 veingo
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A former member wrote:
i enjoyed this piece, the spacing added suspense.
(typo, second to last line? *PLANNED*)
great read, amusing.
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A former member wrote:
hey so am i!
and i'm not one bit sorry! :)
-mars
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On Tuesday, July 25, 2006, Sin
(1168)
wrote:
hehe since you told me the story this makes me laugh...youre silly ~kristy
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On Wednesday, May 17, 2006, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Perfect!
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On Tuesday, March 7, 2006, monalisamarie
(113) wrote:
This is sweet...capturing title...
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A former member wrote:
mwuahaha...fantastic *Sam*
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On Friday, January 13, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
o.O nice first time anybody was honest in a confession:P
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A former member wrote:
I'm thinkin you must be good at it too
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A former member wrote:
"It wasn't me!!! it was the one-armed man!!" pre-meditated, with ulterior motives?
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On Thursday, January 5, 2006, Myrrhkuri the fallen one
(94) wrote:
HA! very humerous!
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On Saturday, December 31, 2005, ShardsofSilence
(222) wrote:
hehe tis amusing ^___^
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A former member wrote:
NO IT WASN'T YOU IT WAS MEI DID IT I SHOULD HAVE THE CREDIT FOR... wait what did I do agian
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On Sunday, December 25, 2005, weyvern
(80) wrote:
like it...love it
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On Saturday, December 24, 2005, Shewolf
(25) wrote:
I love it! But I would never confess LOL. Shewolf
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On Friday, December 23, 2005, coly
(54) wrote:
wow beautiful
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A former member wrote:
*giggles* It's about time you confessed V! *winks* haha...this is wonderful! Very much so you, me thinks. *Evangel*
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A former member wrote:
simple, yet hard hitting..you state it, and move on. this is pretty sinister in its simplicity. i like it.
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A former member wrote:
comedy, hah. you know it's true. i know you did it!! ;)
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On Sunday, December 18, 2005, Graveyard_Desciple
(39) wrote:
no bullshit here, straight forward and heavy hitting. i loke it. good job
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A former member wrote:
Impactful and brooding. It's chant-like quality added to its effect.. bored more easily into the skull.. this burned my conscience.. I think that might not be a good sign..
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A former member wrote:
sinister thinktank piece; quiet the contrary for this time of year, yet. .. some darkness is required i s'pose to really see the light well; i like the enigma of it. . .the 'look over your shoulder' effect... and what did you do??? hmmmm~ness
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