I'm A Killer

By veingo

I did it.



I confess.



It was me.



None the less.



I'm not sorry.



For what I've done.



I had planed it.



All along.

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© 2005 veingo
Published on Sunday, December 18, 2005.     Filed under: "Comedy" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i enjoyed this piece, the spacing added suspense. (typo, second to last line? *PLANNED*) great read, amusing.

  • A former member wrote: hey so am i! and i'm not one bit sorry! :) -mars

  • Sin On Tuesday, July 25, 2006, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    hehe since you told me the story this makes me laugh...youre silly ~kristy

  • Dancing_Monkey On Wednesday, May 17, 2006, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    Perfect!

  • monalisamarie On Tuesday, March 7, 2006, monalisamarie (113)By person wrote:

    This is sweet...capturing title...

  • A former member wrote: mwuahaha...fantastic *Sam*

  • Dissolving Poet On Friday, January 13, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560)By person wrote:

    o.O nice first time anybody was honest in a confession:P

  • A former member wrote: I'm thinkin you must be good at it too

  • A former member wrote: "It wasn't me!!! it was the one-armed man!!" pre-meditated, with ulterior motives?

  • Myrrhkuri the fallen one On Thursday, January 5, 2006, Myrrhkuri the fallen one (94)By person wrote:

    HA! very humerous!

  • ShardsofSilence On Saturday, December 31, 2005, ShardsofSilence (219)By person wrote:

    hehe tis amusing ^___^

  • A former member wrote: NO IT WASN'T YOU IT WAS MEI DID IT I SHOULD HAVE THE CREDIT FOR... wait what did I do agian

  • weyvern On Sunday, December 25, 2005, weyvern (80)By person wrote:

    like it...love it

  • Shewolf On Saturday, December 24, 2005, Shewolf (25)By person wrote:

    I love it! But I would never confess LOL. Shewolf

  • coly On Friday, December 23, 2005, coly (54)By person wrote:

    wow beautiful

  • A former member wrote: *giggles* It's about time you confessed V! *winks* haha...this is wonderful! Very much so you, me thinks. *Evangel*

  • ApathysKiss On Monday, December 19, 2005, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    excellent little piece, chillingly clipped flow punctuates a sinister dread of this revelation. good work ~ak

  • A former member wrote: simple, yet hard hitting..you state it, and move on. this is pretty sinister in its simplicity. i like it.

  • A former member wrote: comedy, hah. you know it's true. i know you did it!! ;)

  • Graveyard_Desciple On Sunday, December 18, 2005, Graveyard_Desciple (39)By person wrote:

    no bullshit here, straight forward and heavy hitting. i loke it. good job

  • A former member wrote: Impactful and brooding. It's chant-like quality added to its effect.. bored more easily into the skull.. this burned my conscience.. I think that might not be a good sign..

  • A former member wrote: sinister thinktank piece; quiet the contrary for this time of year, yet. .. some darkness is required i s'pose to really see the light well; i like the enigma of it. . .the 'look over your shoulder' effect... and what did you do??? hmmmm~ness


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