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I AM ( the birth of Veingo)
By veingo
He,
has always been inside of me.
Dreaming,
and forcing me to see.
Speaking,
and blaming it on me.
Fighting,
and screaming to be free.
AND NOW I AM !
AND NOW I AM !
AND NOW I AM !
AND NOW I AM !
I stare,
in the mirror all the time.
I see,
all the things I try to hide.
I glare,
hard an deep into his eyes.
I want,
to let go. I want to die.
AND NOW I AM !
AND NOW I AM !
AND NOW I AM !
AND NOW I AM !
I
was never confident in life.
He
is strong as steel, and cold as ice.
Hope
that what I'm doing now is right.
Time
to give in. Give up the fight.
AND NOW I AM !
AND NOW I AM !
AND NOW I AM !
AND NOW I AM !
He is me.
I am him.
we are we.
AND NOW I AM!!!!
( I wrote this a long time ago.
it may suck, but hey,
it's mine.)
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© 2005 veingo
Comments on "I AM ( the birth of Veingo)"
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On Friday, May 19, 2006, BrokenButterflyWings
(33)
wrote:
I like this... its a simple yet powerful portrayal of an inner strugle... reminds me of something I wrote a long time ago...
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On Friday, March 24, 2006, Dei
(665) wrote:
Sounds a lot less painful than actual child birth. -_* Anyways, i like this one. Its hopeless, yet it has this edge of defiance. well done
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A former member wrote:
speechless except to say what an excellent birth...oh and I see your not afraid of wide open spaces, nice touch
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A former member wrote:
sounds like someone else I've heard of.....name begins with a d......Dhamer, I think...Jeff....cannabalism will have that effect. No, seriously, psychologically intriguing and universally relevant, doesn't suck at all
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On Wednesday, December 28, 2005, Army Barbie
(324) wrote:
This was fuckin awesome! If it sucked...well I wouldn't bother to comment I'm sure. You rawk ron
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On Wednesday, December 28, 2005, veingo
(532) wrote:
I just love a southern draaawl:)-
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On Tuesday, December 27, 2005, Myrrhkuri the fallen one
(94) wrote:
I think this is pretty cool myself!!! I like it alot
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On Tuesday, December 13, 2005, LordBrosnian
(44) wrote:
I see...
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On Monday, December 12, 2005, Err0r
(365) wrote:
I don't think it sucks. :) Although I would like to say one thing. I'm a hypocrite but hey.-
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On Monday, December 12, 2005, Err0r
(365) wrote:
It's like if your favorite food was steak- it's all about presentation you don't want it served to you on a trash can lid, but on a plate with barsley. :) So don't say it sucks. Let us decide. BEAUTIFUL.:) Your writes are amazing.
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On Sunday, December 11, 2005, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
"( I wrote this a long time ago. it may suck, but hey, it's mine.)" i like this part best. you win! [and no, it very much does not suck.]
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On Sunday, December 11, 2005, veingo
(532) wrote:
I missed something. What do you mean "you win"?
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On Sunday, December 11, 2005, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
um... that's just me saying yay you and everything... ^^ you win at life or whatever. go you!
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On Sunday, December 11, 2005, veingo
(532) wrote:
Oh, thanks.
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A former member wrote:
I know the feelings well. It's a tough battle sometimes looking yourself in the face in the mirror. Your reflection knows whether or not you're living up to your expectations and judges the worst when you aren't. Cool write. ~Ship!
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On Saturday, December 10, 2005, veingo
(532) wrote:
Thanks all.
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A former member wrote:
Well done. This kicks ass V, never doubt yourself. ~Lost~
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A former member wrote:
excelent, replace "sucks" with execellent... fit's it better
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On Saturday, December 10, 2005, blue
(1454) wrote:
o.O)) I thought that was really great man! Suck?? nonono.. you must be mistaken.. nope, I'm sure of it! You are mistaken. ~b
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A former member wrote:
it actually gave me chills..almost frightening portrayal of the inner, trying to achieve outer status, to break away from it's confines. the struggle, the acceptance, it's all portrayed here. lovely.
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On Saturday, December 10, 2005, D3ADT0WN
(186) wrote:
This dosn't suck i like it very much its good.
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