My Sunshine Is Not Your Sunshine (Anymore)
By Army Barbie
I'd sing you a song
If I knew how to string
The words together
A string of pearls found in your heart.
If only
I could find someone
(Or something)
Worthy of your humble eyes.
If I was worthy
I'd pour the rain
Out of cotton candy.pink.clouds.
It would be pure
Color of crystal
You'd open your mouth
And taste the sweet delicacy.
If I was worthy
I'd watercolor a rainbow
To make you smile.
If only I could make you smile...
I'd breathe butterfly wings
And pluck the stars guarding heaven's gates
To make a halo for you.
And I'd lace the halo
With my freckles
Because you've always thought them adorable.
If only you found me sexy
And not so dollishly cute
I'd purr in your lap.
Lap you up.
And hug you for the rest of time.
Oh, if only I could hug you tonight!
I'd show you love.
I'd pour you a heart
Filled with tropical.skittle.kisses.
Smoothie.skittle.kisses if you prefered.
If I were sweet enough
I'd lead you to a candyland
Of hopes and dreams
And feed you sugar canes of love.
Because I love you.
Alas, I am not your's.
My sunshine resides in my sky only.
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Comments on "My Sunshine Is Not Your Sunshine (Anymore)"
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A former member wrote:
I read this piece yesterday, and i really liked it then, and the second time around it was even better. keep it up.
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On Friday, December 16, 2005, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
So sweet & endearing! You always give me tears with your words. Also made me wish for candy! lol~ :) Beautiful write.
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On Monday, December 12, 2005, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
You make me smile.
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A former member wrote:
I've read alot of your work and I'm new here. Your poems really speak to me. I havn't posted anything yet but I will soon.
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A former member wrote:
ya know.... I don't normally comment on people's work for .. well my own reasons. But I enjoyed this, I liked the simplicity it tried to show, but enjoyed even more the content that shows a heart everyone would like to know. Great write
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On Tuesday, November 29, 2005, Err0r
(358) wrote:
Skittle Kisses! EXCELLENT. And yes, yes I will do you. Because You are that great. Hooray. This was done hm...a good word to fit this -'enchantingly' Hoorah. :)
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A former member wrote:
"Alas, I am not your's." God damnit Courtney, you've once again brought a sharpened edge of pain to the heart I thought had died eight months ago...another beautiful piece of (delicious) rememberances. *Evangel*
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A former member wrote:
love the visualisation (kind of a Helena from Midsummer Nights dream little theme) nice work !
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On Monday, November 28, 2005, MESUN
(230) wrote:
wow. this was a magical creation laced with beautiful imagery. this is just excellent.