...but ths is where I am

By Imsosickxxx

I found you there, in the cemetary
Sitting amongst the crumbling headstones,
Dead flowers rotting at your feet.

I found you there, with a cloud over your head.
Dark and drab,
Dreadfully quiet,
Like the last dying leaves of an Autumn tree,
Dark and dingy, brown and orange.

I found you there, hands cracked and peeling.
Clawing at the ground upon which you sat,
Broken fingernails and bloody knuckles,
Your eyes dead, waiting for sleep, for death
Eyes, that have seen the world for what it was, cold, shallow, lonely.

I found you there, your back against the well.
Poisoned grass that turns to ashes at your fingertips,
looking down at me, remembering my face.

I found you there, standing at my grave.

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© 2007 Imsosickxxx
Published on Wednesday, March 14, 2007.     Filed under: "Horror" and "Poetry"
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Comments on "...but ths is where I am"

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  • A former member wrote: That was amazing, it had such strong imagery...

  • A former member wrote: you're brilliant.. i loved the way you separated the two poems ..but both found each other to reunite...

  • Tania On Wednesday, March 14, 2007, Tania (192)By person wrote:

    This is wonderful.. i can only echo everyone else.. a lovely write.. dark and powerful.. i enjoyed this.

  • Mylissa On Wednesday, March 14, 2007, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    the ending was powerful and brought together the whole poem. great job.

  • Dark Nymph On Wednesday, March 14, 2007, Dark Nymph (24)By person wrote:

    Wondefully dark and I love the imagery. Awesome job

  • A former member wrote: wow.I loved the contrast from the last one.the imagery was perfect and that last line...such an end!

  • The Shattered Heart On Wednesday, March 14, 2007, The Shattered Heart (30)By person wrote:

    Wow....great write as always. :)


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