Evernow
By veingo
What have you done to me?
You're all I want and all I need.
Once again I beg you please.
Promise to devour me.
We've done this all befor.
But so much is unexplored.
You are all that I adore.
And always leave me wanting more.
The harder I go.
The deeper I go.
The longer I go.
The faster I go.
You look at me as though,
you're gonna tear me all up inside.
But with love in your eyes,
and trust in your smile.
The time I spent away from you.
I tried so hard to self-induce.
That feeling known as de ja vue.
To see the afterglow in you.
So now here we are again.
I knew it couldn't be the end.
Oh how lonely I have been.
Isn't lust a lovely sin?
After all that we've been through.
Please tell me that it's true.
The last thing you'll ever do.
Is take me to the grave with you.
Because we are together now,
I hope that your love will allow.
For you to trust this solemn vow.
I am yours forever now.
Comments on "Evernow"
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A former member wrote:
Love the emotions put in to this work!
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On Tuesday, June 15, 2010, keltruth7
(18) wrote:
perfect name for a perfect write!
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A former member wrote:
what fools men be... this is very nice very ideal... I particularly love the 4th stanza for some reason. to bring back the afterglow... just seems time is somehow twisted by that language..
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On Sunday, October 30, 2005, Err0r
(358) wrote:
'The harder I go. The deeper I go. The longer I go. The faster I go. ' Amazing. Such an impact you have created here. How envious and adoring I am of you now. :)
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On Saturday, October 22, 2005, Army Barbie
(316) wrote:
I didn't expect this to be as beautiful as it was.I only clicked on it because I liked the word 'Evernow' This...this is beyond beautiful and holds so much meaning to me. I'm crying, what the hell did you do to me? =)
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A former member wrote:
"That feeling known as deja vu. To see the afterglow in you." Awwwwwwww...so sentimentally sweet...this almost threatened to choke me in it's sincerity...and yet...I wanted to be wrapped in your words forever. Beautifully done. *Evangel*