Elizabeth

By rainbowgoth

Evil inside
Lonely
Insane
Zoning out, longing to feel
Alive
But always dying inside while
Everyone stares
Til someday she will find the answers she
Has been searching for

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Copyright 2005 rainbowgoth
Published on Sunday, October 9, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: this is short & interestingly deep. good work!

  • Child of GOD On Monday, August 25, 2008, Child of GOD (3)By person wrote:

    making poems spelling names or words is not easy. This one is done quite well. Love it!

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Thursday, October 27, 2005, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    I like this one very much. It's short and simple, but still paints a picture effectively. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • A former member wrote: well worked... . 'dying inside while everyone stares' [such is the life of a queen] ~ness~ Scholar

  • A former member wrote: *Claps within the silence* This is wonderful...although...well, my name is Elizabeth...Hopefully this isn't how I really am. *Looks around for a clue* Hehe...wonderful write. *Evangel* Scholar

  • aCiD aNgEL On Sunday, October 9, 2005, aCiD aNgEL (31)By person wrote:

    i really like that. beautiful

  • A former member wrote: nice write its short but i feel it says alot

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