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DEATH, then the kiss
By veingo
Dead, and yet I still need.
Dead and I'm still bleeding.
Dead, and yet I still bleed.
Dead and I'm still feeling.
Dead, and yet I still feel.
Dead and I'm still dreaming.
Dead, and yet I still dream.
Dead and I'm still needing.
She gave me a handfull of pills,
and said this should fix everything.
The warm and soft touch of her lips,
then just kissed my death away.
Only dreams could be so sweet.
But wake or dreaming she's the same.
She's still here when I awake.
More real to me than my own name.
She keeps me breathing.
I think she must need me.
She keeps me wanting.
But tries not to tease me.
She keeps me sane.
She must think well of me.
She keeps me living.
I think she must love me.
I want to die again.
So she will kiss it all away.
Let me die and then,
Lady kiss it all away.
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On Monday, February 13, 2012, Clydes_Bonnie
(55)
wrote:
This is beautiful. It is amazing how the beauty in one person can effect us so greatly. I look around to see how to add you to my fav poets and I see I am one of yours already. Very cool :) thank you
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On Thursday, June 16, 2011, The Lioness Rampant
(40) wrote:
very well phrased i loved the imagery and the way you wrote this piece its like a story of small proportions but it makes you wonder what else there is to uncover. keep on penning! i loved it!
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On Tuesday, June 15, 2010, keltruth7
(18) wrote:
i really like the way you wrote this. it has a boldness to it, if that makes sense!
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On Friday, June 11, 2010, Riven Waker
(323) wrote:
hypnotically exquisite work - skillfully formed
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A former member wrote:
that could be a song or somethin.. i think we all can relate..good job.
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A former member wrote:
Awesome! I think we've all had moments when we've felt like this. xox
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On Friday, May 19, 2006, BrokenButterflyWings
(33) wrote:
Intriguing… I wish I could hear the melody…
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On Wednesday, March 22, 2006, monalisamarie
(113) wrote:
Chilling...beautiful contrasts
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On Friday, January 13, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
Wow*I applaud you* Made me feel a deep emontion
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On Saturday, December 24, 2005, Shewolf
(25) wrote:
great work! Shewolf
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On Monday, October 3, 2005, MESUN
(230) wrote:
that's how i felt exactly one week ago. i wanted to die for some compassion, for any love. excellent capture of emotion.
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A former member wrote:
wow this was really really good you have talent that others apsire to have..nicely done
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