*Heartbroken*

By Kinkypoptart

-Sitting here-
.[awake].
.[Misery]. -overwhelming-
Far too .[tired].
to deal with
this .[shit].
I can't -believe-
your .[selfishness].
I -sit-
And I .[cry].
I -laugh-
And I .[lie].
Tell you i'm .[fine].
On the -Inside-
*Heartbroken*

-Lying in bed-
.[Staring]. at my ceiling
Thinking of all
The .[good]. times
We -shared-
Together
I can {feel}
The .[tears].
-Flowing-
To my |eyes|
-Running-
Down my |cheeks|
-Thinking-
Of .[you].
*Heartbroken*

-Wandering around-
aimlessly
mumbling .[incoherent].
I |love| you
Hating the .[silence].
The |loneliness|
.[overwhelming].
-I've shattered-
To .[pieces].
-Screaming-
.[Inside].
Meaninglessly .[Random].
-A tear-
In my .[eye].
*Heartbroken*

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Copyright 2005 Kinkypoptart
Published on Saturday, May 21, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • italianbella On Monday, December 24, 2007, italianbella (185)By person wrote:

    beautifully painfull and full of so much emotion wonderful read:)

  • A former member wrote: if he let you go, hes an idiot. nice poem. it made me feel

  • Mr King On Thursday, June 9, 2005, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    hang in there... let him go... he doesn't deserve you... Love, Seth

  • A former member wrote: I adore it. *hugs forever*

  • Serenity On Wednesday, June 1, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    Amazing write! Nice set up too.

  • A former member wrote: this one is damn good

  • etarnally damnd On Sunday, May 22, 2005, etarnally damnd (61)By person wrote:

    good write it sucks to feel this way i know-michael

  • Omalleyjr On Saturday, May 21, 2005, Omalleyjr (22)By person wrote:

    you have a very interisting style of writing

  • Lost_Soul On Saturday, May 21, 2005, Lost_Soul (34)By person wrote:

    Even though I find the brackets a little annoying, I do find this poem to be a fitting description of heartbreak.

  • DarkDruidess On Saturday, May 21, 2005, DarkDruidess (326)By person wrote:

    *sing on sister*...let the world hear what heartbreak sounds like...

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