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Waters
By Lord Kalgalath
Hopes and Dreams
And half baked wishes
A bridge to the stars
That was never complete
Reaching, stretching, yearning
For the pure fire they offer
To burn away the harsh realities
Leaving only the memory of a better day
Bitter bitter medicine
When you learn the truth of life
That life is an illusion
A dream within a dream
Through which we walk
Half blined by the sleep of innocence
Ah, the tears make a sweet salt sea
So easy to drown in
Then again...
So easy to float in as well
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Copyright 2005 Bestrafer Engel
Published on Thursday, May 5, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, November 3, 2014, knightmirror
(426)
wrote:
how come I never read this ... or for that matter talked to you... this is very pulchritudinous and inspiring... thank you so much for sharing and I'm glad I read one of your creations... thank you again... stay safe and stay blessed... -knight
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On Tuesday, October 18, 2005, Doc
(145) wrote:
Floating is key, drowing accomplished little more than feeding the fishes. Nice write man.
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On Monday, July 11, 2005, Mr King
(547) wrote:
feather & lead... life science... brilliant.
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A former member wrote:
these words did seem to float in my mind.. light and fluent across red rivers. this was beautiful, dear. you're wonderful.
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A former member wrote:
a dream to read, and have these words floating within my head. Lovely..
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A former member wrote:
"Hopes and Dreams And half baked wishes A bridge to the stars That was never complete/ To burn away the harsh realities Leaving only the memory of a better day".. absolutely beautiful. The last four lines, just, beautiful, and so much more..
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On Tuesday, May 24, 2005, happilydepressed
(409) wrote:
i thought i read this before, but I was caught up in it again. That is true poetry, it makes it never grows old no matter how many times you read it
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On Monday, May 9, 2005, Eladrim
(47) wrote:
brilliant! "half blinded by the sleep of innocence" i love that, just like innocence is bliss. great work -Jesse
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On Thursday, May 5, 2005, wandering druid
(79) wrote:
There is such depth to this, and like NikesRain said, quite thought provoking.
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On Thursday, May 5, 2005, happilydepressed
(409) wrote:
awesome shit man, very enjoyable read
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On Thursday, May 5, 2005, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
omg Dev, thought provoking to say the very least, starting off in a solemn way temper a little sadness into it and just sweep it skyward with the last lines, like releasing a dove.....wonderful
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