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Dream Lovin
By Kinkypoptart
Running my fingers through your hair
The heat of the sun dancing across your face
You smile and I smile, everthings so right
My love and I, just dancing, you smile so bright
The sand scrunching between my toes
Water washing over my bare feet
You stare into my big brown eyes and I, yours
Lost in our own little moment, nearby the ocean roars
Together on the beach, wind whipping in
Your hair blowing across your beautiful face
I touch my hand to your cheek, I kiss your lips
You then move closer to me, your hands on my hips
Your mind in a daze and your heart lost at sea
Our bodies fit together just so damn perfectly
Just as the stars have begun to appear
We lay on the blanket and you hold me near
You look at me grinning and softly kiss my lips
Your hand on my side, my heart in your hands
I pull off your shirt and expose your firm chest
I trust you completely because you love me best
My shirt comes off slowly and I feel the cold
You love and caress me and I seem to forget
Your hands on my skin, your lips pressed to mine
Fingers running straight down my back in a line
My heart races and pounds in my chest
I unbutton your jeans and slide them right down
I guide my leg across your waist as I rub up on your body
And I just cant believe that we're being so naughty
I kiss the soft skin on your neck and your chest
Knowing you love when I touch you like this
Down over your stomach as I kiss and I grind
Your body starts shaking, you're losing your mind
I come back up and kiss you
You roll me to the sand
You slowly make love to me softly, smoothly
I become yours all over again, everytime you move me
We lay together in the cool, midday shade
Sweaty bodies against one another
We smile at each other and all ends well
And in that sweet moment, in love I fell
I awake to the dog barking
My dream has now ended
Only in my sleep could I ever hold you
It was only a dream, Rochelle, it was only a dream
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Copyright 2005 Kinkypoptart
Comments on "Dream Lovin"
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A former member wrote:
awww but some dreams can come true... most do.
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A former member wrote:
...groovy, and i just love the way you make it rhyme.
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A former member wrote:
nice mental images, awesome write
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On Tuesday, May 24, 2005, xDeAthxPerCepTioNxReaLiTyx
(36)
wrote:
It started off so happy and you had me feeling great then at the end my heart was crushed. I love it when i read a poem that gets me in touch with my emotions. Great work!
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On Tuesday, May 24, 2005, Mr King
(547) wrote:
freaky PG-13 dream... or is it R?
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A former member wrote:
there use to be an grey tower along by the sea, will you become that light of the darkside of me. will love remain a drug thats strong enough to kill. and did you know that when they glow, my eyes become alive and the light the they shine can be seen.
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A former member wrote:
the world is like a flower, always changing at the next season ...and all things change, milady ... but dreams. Dreams are made for what we want and wish for ... dreams are the bomb, no? very visual your poem is ...
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On Wednesday, May 18, 2005, ONEANDLONELY
(117) wrote:
You pulled me in and held me there. I could not stop... I am referring to the poem of course.
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A former member wrote:
Love does hurt, doesn't it? Sometimes, when I dream exotic dreams, I imagine that they will be real when I'm older. I mean, the men in my dreams will be real in my life. Maybe they are real, and we have to find them.
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A former member wrote:
Love is pain and reality is a bitch. Keep up with the flow of your detail and the art in your words. Also, remember that dreams keep us alive...painful or not. The numb never live.
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On Saturday, April 16, 2005, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
Its quite a vivid dream. I love the imagery. The sensual touch to this is felt and loved
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On Friday, April 15, 2005, eastpatient
(47) wrote:
The heat of the sun dancing across your face Love that line. Very purdy, all of it.
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A former member wrote:
A simply beautiful piece, so elegant, and i just love it. Good job.
-Tom-
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On Friday, April 15, 2005, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
...quite the dream sweetheart...this is soooo sensual and so moving....descriptive muchly, so as making the reader feel as tho they are there...very beautiful piece*
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On Friday, April 15, 2005, Cinn
(152) wrote:
Aww the ending to this is so sad, but I still love it. Great wite. -Cinn
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A former member wrote:
Aww, this was sweet.... And hey, I've come to realize that dreaming is better than nothing at all :)
- Orchid
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