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late with a broken watch
By swing_the_hammer
I broke your heart
so please take mine
I lost the hours
of countless time
I lost my sleep
I hope you rest
My beating heart
stopped in my chest
I couldn't see you
lost my way
I'll chase you down
if you won't stay
Why can't I cry?
You took my sorrow
I'll steal it back
from you tomorrow
I lost the language
from my lips
It's fallen to
your fingertips
I made up the words
to fit the play
You put them out
upon display
I lost the hours
of countless time
I broke your heart
So, please... take mine.
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Copyright 2005 swing_the_hammer
Published on Thursday, January 27, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, April 12, 2005, so_skeevy
(64)
wrote:
excellent finish to an excellent write. good job.
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A former member wrote:
I really like the flow of this, it seemed to just roll off my mind as i read it.
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On Thursday, January 27, 2005, Kali Ma
(43) wrote:
Wow, this was... perfect. I loved it, it was fun to read with an amazing rhythm... I really, really enjoyed it. ~ Asheai
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On Thursday, January 27, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(241) wrote:
Great ryhyme the words flowed smooth and quick Good Job :) ~*Kitty*~
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