Suicidal Tendencies

By Angelic Darkness

Suicidal tendencies.
Attempts are moral enemies.

A bullet to the head.
Does not assure that one's dead.

Pleasure taken in the pain.
Self infliction makes me sane.

Sometimes I just wanna scream.
and I wish this was a dream.

My delusional realities are just a tease.
But the temptations are here to please.

Fear not, things ARE what they seem.
The truth in Life, Death is just a scheme.

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Copyright 2004 Angelic Darkness
Published on Saturday, December 11, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Congrats on your "Poem of the day"-reward. (High on that suipride)

  • mvvenkataraman On Sunday, July 18, 2010, mvvenkataraman (13)By person wrote:

    Dear respected Angelic Darkness, Your rhyme scheme is classic And number of lines is limited So reading gives a pleasant kick Understanding is also permitted With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly, M V VENKATARAMAN

  • Crimsonrose On Monday, September 21, 2009, Crimsonrose (9)By person wrote:

    The last line blew me away. I enjoyed this greatly

  • Angelic Darkness On Saturday, December 18, 2004, Angelic Darkness (27)By person wrote:

    Thank you. And thanks for pointing out my spelling error. Must of skimmed that. Heh. ~*~Angi~*~

  • A former member wrote: yes this was an enjoyable read.

  • Angst Queen On Saturday, December 11, 2004, Angst Queen (370)By person wrote:

    I like how you did this. I rather enjoyed it

  • sIo On Saturday, December 11, 2004, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    tendencies*

  • A former member wrote: i like the writting scheme.

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