Comments by mvvenkataraman
- "The poet has methodically arranged
After taking sincere pains to create
I am greatly awed by the rhyme
That contains good meaning also.
mvvenkataraman"
Posted by mvvenkataraman on "Live in Death" by SirEnders
- "I must totally agree with this
We see fully different things
After death comes to take us
From this cruel World we all
Will escape due to only death
And so death is a savior
A simple, but a fine poem."
Posted by mvvenkataraman on "Death." by EMOheart
- "True. Genuine love makes us tensed. Our respect for the loved person makes us think before doing any loving act as we deeply love our dear person. This is absolutely true I strongly declare. Thanks. mvvvenkataraman"
Posted by mvvenkataraman on "out of sight." by eidos
- "Dear respected ColorMeToxic ~,
Your story shatters my peace,
I feel extremely sorry for you,
God alone must give solace,
Please accept my sympathy,
Pray to your God and appeal,
Only prayer can solve worry,
I will surely chant a prayer,
To give you a calm mind.
Yours prayerfully,
mvvenkataraman"
Posted by mvvenkataraman on "The Day That Changed My Life Forever" by ColorMeToxic
- "In this way only we need support
Some get it, many do not get
I am one such poor person
But, at last God saved me
A nice poetry I sincerely feel
Very practical, telling the truth
All need some or other support
May God bless all poor souls.
Thanks, Yours truly,
mvvenkataraman"
Posted by mvvenkataraman on "Twilight" by scarletara
- "You seem to remove mind's darkness
Your advice is absolutely valuable
My heart is dancing with great joy
After reading your admonition
Thanks a lot, Yours truly,
mvvenkataraman"
Posted by mvvenkataraman on "Painting Happiness" by scarletara
- "Dear respected Malcholm Dark,
Your emotions I truly appreciate
And such feelings even I possess
You have given poetic description
And they powerfully expose frauds
When such a situation arises
We have no other go, but to accept
As we have to carry on our life
God alone holds the real answer.
With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly,
M V VENKATARAMAN
"
Posted by mvvenkataraman on "Thoughts Of A Madman Pt. 2" by Malcholm Dark
- "Dear respected Angelic Darkness,
Your rhyme scheme is classic
And number of lines is limited
So reading gives a pleasant kick
Understanding is also permitted
With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly,
M V VENKATARAMAN"
Posted by mvvenkataraman on "Suicidal Tendencies" by Angelic Darkness
