Water Marks

By Crystal Passion

They singe me when youâ€™re with her
Scalding my cheeks with their moist embers
Lacking spark and distinguishing rouge
They drown meâ€¦

â€¦ unknowingly to everyone else

They engulf me when youâ€™re with her
Satcheled, tethered, and sinking deep
Their weight hindering my breath
They mock meâ€¦

â€¦ unknowingly to everyone else

They break me when youâ€™re with her
Shredding with masochistic undertones
Reminders of a shattered heart
They kill meâ€¦

â€¦unknowingly to everyone else-
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because I only cry when Iâ€™m alone.

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Published on Monday, November 29, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Water Marks"

A former member wrote: tears are the cause of emotional horror...soft, wet tears on the outside; steaming drops of liquid fire on the inside...almost like dragon's tears.
On Thursday, January 27, 2005, Anth (1126) wrote:

u have such talent, no matter the subject, your expression makes for always a stunning read
On Saturday, January 15, 2005, Crystal Passion (221) wrote:

where did those funny characters come from? oh well.. ill leave them for interest :x
On Wednesday, December 22, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me (171) wrote:

very passionate, emotional and sad all at the same time, beautiful words, great job ~Emptyness~ ~Josh~
A former member wrote: that was so passionate and beautiful a wonderful write
On Monday, November 29, 2004, Sin (1135) wrote:

this was so crushingly sad and soft and elegant at the same time, wonderfully done ~kristy
On Monday, November 29, 2004, Rone4611 (121) wrote:

such a passionate feeling of jelousy... beautiful