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My Love My Love
By Atalanta
You love me even though you really do not know me
Even though you have not seen my face
You made me feel beautiful
Even though I know I am not
You were there for me
Even when I was sure that I would die
My love for you is strong
It carries me through the dark
Loving you kept me alive
When I was sure the fight for my life
Would be in vain
Your beautiful face was in my mind as I slowly slipped away
Now I am alive
And not so well
I am terribly weak and forlorn
But it is thanks to you
For loving me even in the face of death
Even when I knew that I might die
**This is written for Daemonicus. When I was shot, my aunt contacted him.
His love carried me through the worst. Now I am on the mend, but my strength
sometimes fails me. So DP population, thanks for your support and get well
soon's. Deamon, I love you. Thank you for everything.*
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Copyright 2004 Atalanta
Published on Thursday, November 11, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "My Love My Love"
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A former member wrote:
How sad that such a talent is gone from the world. I feel her spirit living on in her lovely poems. Be at peace, dear heart.
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On Friday, March 16, 2007, carlosjackal
(3016)
wrote:
Emotional, touching, and just absolutely fantastic..I'm so glad Atalanta's profile has been kept here on DP so that her poetry can still be enjoyed even after her passing. May her spirit live on.
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On Tuesday, December 7, 2004, island warrior
(210) wrote:
How beautiful.
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On Wednesday, December 1, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
i'm happy to know you're ok now, wonderful write and tribute as well.. sweet and admiring. beatiful
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On Friday, November 19, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
Very sweet tribute. Ciao, T/S
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On Friday, November 12, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
a beautiful tribute to a beautiful soul. Daemon, you deserve this so absolutely; Atalanta, this is a lovely poem. I wish you all the best of things.
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On Thursday, November 11, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
That would scare the crap out of me. Daemonicus is a great guy. He knows how to make someone feel better and feel loved. Wonderful tribute, Atlanta
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A former member wrote:
This is just beautiful . . "Your beautiful face was in my mind as I slowly slipped away". I can feel this tugging at my heart. *curtseys* . . very wonderful indeed. I am impressed, and I feel a tear swelling. ~ Rose.
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On Thursday, November 11, 2004, Midnight Shadow
(67) wrote:
Oh wow, absolutely beautiful. *smiles and welcomes you warmly to the dp home* It is sure to be a wonderful stay here for you as well. ~Tracy
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On Thursday, November 11, 2004, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
a very touching and heartfelt write. Best to you and to the sweetest of demons ;) he's definitely a rare and precious one.
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On Thursday, November 11, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
A shome noone commented on this. I saw lots of emotion .. And I like it. now go send him a mail telling him about this write :O) *dances*
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On Thursday, November 11, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Ohh.. And a big warm wellcome to our midts
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