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Antidote For Pain [pleasure of time]
By BeautifulCalamity
I Can't...
Be My Own, When In
My Mind I'm Divided Twice,
In Depth.. I'm Dulled
Like The Taste Of Cough.
If I've Been The Cause,
Then I Call The Cause To Be Released,
Forgotten...
Pushed And Punished.
Like Shades Of Transparent,
The Halves Of My Heart Have Been
Opened...
(Open, Like The Ocean.Forced.. And My
Stories Are Told To Travelers, Just Passing By.. Just Passing)
...Shamelessly, As Though They've Never
Seen Sun.. Bright, Constricting..
(Seen)
It's More Than Natural To Me,
It's The Way.. Sitting,
Internal Self Exposed.
Bleeding Through, But With No Where To Spread..
(My Touch Falls Short Of A Great Distance)
Nothing To Cling To,
(Hold Me Love, Comfort.. hurt)
No One To Feel For,
Finding..
I Stay Away From Verbiage That Infiltrates,
and Changes Form
Quickly..
Without Thought Or Remorse,
Until I Have Been Shown...
Showing In A Constant, That I Am..
I AM , I AM , I AM..
More Than Anything I've Ever Been..
I Am..
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Copyright 2004 BeautifulCalamity
Published on Tuesday, September 21, 2004.
Filed under: "Philosophical" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Antidote For Pain [pleasure of time]"
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A former member wrote:
This was very thought provoking and I can really relate to the idea of incompletedness and feeling like we are destined for more than this. Very nicely done. ~Ryan
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A former member wrote:
Great, just great! All of it!
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On Sunday, October 3, 2004, Lynaes
(854)
wrote:
You're such a unique writer... This is very elegant and graceful, I particularly love "(My Touch Falls Short Of A Great Distance)Nothing To Cling To, (Hold Me Love, Comfort.. hurt) No One To Feel For"
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On Sunday, October 3, 2004, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
You are very talented, but I would strongly suggest that you try writing without the caps to each word, it can be easier on the eyes, thus enhancing the feel of the piece. Wonderful work otherwise.
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A former member wrote:
bitter, but wonderful all the while. i like it. nice write.
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On Thursday, September 30, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
so bitter so wonderful. nice work, calamity
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A former member wrote:
Just sweet and perfectly bitter...a nice contrast.
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On Friday, September 24, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
thank you a lot, i'm glad you liked it, and Capitals Are Always Fun! :>
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, GreekPhilosopher
(156) wrote:
I Liked This. Now, I Must Say That I Don't Usually Like These Types Of Writings But This One Was Just So Honest That I Had To Like It. Thanks. PS: I Thought I Was The Only One Who Wrote With Capitals At The Begining Of Each Word. Cool! GPhD.
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