screaming silence

By liquid_emotion

I couldnt cry

even as my throat swelled shut

and the heaviness seeped into my viens

the world swimming before my eyes

emotions so raw and brutal

physical pain aching in my chest

choking out the oxygen

filling the air with a cold numbness

each fine hair on my body rising

while shaking violently inside

from the effort of keeping it all

Quiet

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Published on Tuesday, March 19, 2002. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "screaming silence"

A former member wrote: I love it. I know what you mean by this I get the same emotions as well. I have gotten so used to not showing my emotions because I always get so paranoid of others reaction over them.
On Thursday, December 27, 2007, italianbella (185) wrote:

emotional and raw great write:)
A former member wrote: i like this one alot
A former member wrote: i loved the way this was written. it gave me chills half way through and inspired me to write something
A former member wrote: while reading it, i felt shaken.. until the end, when i felt some kind of disturbing peace.. i love it when you are touched by nothing more than a few words
On Sunday, June 6, 2004, eternal despair (66) wrote:

very well written, i felt the deepness of it all. \m/
On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, Angel With The Scabbed Wings (40) wrote:

It is just so beautiful. It is so deep that I can feel the pain that you expressed through this peice.
A former member wrote: my logo is .;+'StillnessShouts'+;. I think silence must always scream.. even if it has to stay still. if u want to read more,you can take a look to my essay about stillness that shouts.... anyway,wonderful work!! ***
A former member wrote: Amazing. So simple and short yet so meaningful and deep. It excellently describes it all. Impressive. - samantha :)
On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, OLd SouL (734) wrote:

great job from start to finish. You depicted the feeling quite well.
A former member wrote: this poem's amazingly descriptive, that very hard sometimes. i love the thought, and oxymorons in general, "screaming silence." i think the idea is in a couple of my poems as well.
On Sunday, April 20, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321) wrote:

really nice I like it too...keep writing!
A former member wrote: I really like this. Good description, and the last line making the all important definition. Nice word/line play. :)
On Tuesday, March 18, 2003, cre (411) wrote:

This is incredibly excellent. Great job.
On Tuesday, March 25, 2003, darkness_descends (12) wrote:

WOW! How you captured that emotion in such a short and to the point poem I will never know. Bravo! I agree post more. ~Darkness~
A former member wrote: the feelings sound very familiar and u ve done a great job puttin it into words...good job keep it up
On Friday, February 21, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (1703) wrote:

Great job at expressing this state of emotion - you have captured it so well.
On Thursday, February 20, 2003, Jonas (720) wrote:

you are fucking good. there is not much more to say. excellence. post more! post more!
A former member wrote: hehe. this one is special to me too. i've never been good at audibly expressing my pain. love it.
A former member wrote: wow....how could you capture these feelings and put them into words...very impressive
On Friday, February 14, 2003, urbanhumility (1175) wrote:

ahh,...despondancy , our inner silence. impressed.u.h.
A former member wrote: the tension, the constriction, suffocation.... masterful... brava