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Forgive me
By Mistress Morbid
I wish I could be here today
to feel the sun's warmth upon my face
and to feel the cool breeze
gently gliding through my hair
the butterflies flutter past
chasing each other
Was I wrong to let you go?
You wanted your freedom
You said you wanted to feel
what it was like to spread your wings
and fly through the world
with no strings attached
I let you fly free
choose freedom over me
leave me to my bitter misery
Please leave me be
and let me just bleed
bleed
b l e e d
b . l . e . e . d
my sorrows away
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Copyright 2004 Mistress Morbid
Published on Monday, August 30, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Forgive me"
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On Thursday, September 9, 2004, Dayer
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wrote:
extremely sad & painful but a masterpiece at the same time
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A former member wrote:
again, you paint a beautiful image in my mind. i really have no words to do anything you write justice. but you are beautiful. nice work.
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On Thursday, September 2, 2004, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
very nice.. i like how this feels .. just let the blood spill.. *669*
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On Wednesday, September 1, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
This is conflicting...Very conflicting...Both views are pain causing...I dont know...
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On Wednesday, September 1, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
Such a sorrowfull end. Such a beautiful work. -Michael
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On Tuesday, August 31, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
so saddening,and powerfully written, an incredible work
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