I'll Be Fine

By JiNx

Staring at the stars tonight
I'm sick of feeling empty
Nothing feels alright
I no longer feel free
I feel so worthless
Feel so alone
Sitting in this darkness
Thinking about whats unknown
My soul feels pain
And my heart is broken
This just isn't vain
And nothing thats spoken
Is understood
Everythings gone bad
Nothing left thats good
All I am is sad
My eyes have become cold
I'm all alone
I'm growing old
And no one knows
the secret that I hold
If I died today
Would people notice?
I'm beginning to fade away
Would I be missed?
Does anyone care?
I'm sinking fast
This life isn't fair
Thinking of my past
Why was it so painful?
The memories haunt me
The past was distrustful
Scars you can't see
Are hidden inside
Deep within this mind
Nothing left to find
And I will forever hide
I'll let no one in
Into this head of mine
You can't even begin
to understand but I'll be fine...

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Copyright 2004 Jessie Nicole
Published on Monday, August 23, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Lord Kalgalath On Thursday, November 18, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (182)By person wrote:

    I can completely identify with this. =hugs= I would miss you, and I'm sure others here would too.

  • Dayer On Friday, September 3, 2004, Dayer (162)By person wrote:

    Wow.....great write

  • A former member wrote: wow.. i know i dont understand what your going through prolly but i know that somehow i am similar but they are two differnt subjects though.... nicely written...~blackroses~

  • A former member wrote: WOW! its like when i read those words, the computer breathes cold air from the saddness in your words....very, very nicely done! keep it up :-) -namelezimmortal

  • NikesRain On Monday, August 23, 2004, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    seems like you put a lot of thought into this write. Filled with such sadness. Nicely done Jinx.

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