A Dedication to Friends

By Shadow Fox

I've lived in a deep, dark void
for such a long time.

I sat alone and watched
as the world passed me by.

I didn't want anyone
to keep me company.

Afraid that I'd be hurt again,
I stayed alone. It was only me.

The ones who tried to get too close,
I just kept pushing them away.

Some of them gave in and left,
but a few saw through my mask and stayed.

I wondered why they stayed with me
after all the things I did and said.

So one day I asked them this
and they told me "because you need a friend."

At first I was cautious,
but time passed and I began giving in.

And over time my aching heart
began to ease a bit.

You taught me what it felt like
to be happy once again.

Now I know what it's like
to truly live again.

After all of this,
there's only one thing left for me to do

And that is to show to you...
...my gratitude.

Only one thing comes to mind,
the only one that seems to fit

And as I think back, these words...
"...Thank You..." escape my lips.



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Copyright 2004 Shadow Fox
Published on Friday, July 23, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Loserland On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Loserland (113)By person wrote:

    friends?....yes i seem to remember them....it's been so long.....ah...anyway..well put

  • Midnight Shadow On Friday, September 17, 2004, Midnight Shadow (67)By person wrote:

    Oh, hey fellow Shadow girl! *hugs her from across town* I think I know that somehow this was partially wrote with me in mind, so in return, I thank you as well. Your friend always, Tracy.

  • K_Love On Friday, July 23, 2004, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    Aww.. that's sweet. I know the feelings of wanting to be alone but at the same time knowing you need someone there. Great write. ~Kirsten~

  • Malice In Wonderland On Friday, July 23, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (976)By person wrote:

    Awww this was great Foxxy...i loved it lots...it was truely a great peom kya Scholar

  • A former member wrote: wow, i wish i could relate, friendship is a bit of a struggle atm. but still, incredible. wow. Scholar

  • elisa On Friday, July 23, 2004, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    A beautiful hind sight view:) Great Poem!

  • NikesRain On Friday, July 23, 2004, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    ..this is truly one of the nicest writes I've seen. The scheme and rhyme are great. Very well done.

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