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Patchouli's Undercurrents..{Stink}+{Slip}+{Strut)
By A Velvet Tongue
Patchouli's undercurrent
Stink...Strut
evasive + mind + numb
mame me with {jesus} boots
Slaughter Avenue
bent in June
Strut..Slip
cracks + swallowing+ death
Porn - star -secrets
pure hands.. dripping wood
Slip..Stink
fuck this {face}
+~+Freeze Frame+~+
...........Rewind
......Time
None
(un) done
Rock -N- Roll
slaughted + holes
fantasy..{whore}
Stink...Slip..
Love's Speldor
roses.+by+the+dozen
mass of thorns
crash head on = 90mph
Elusive Lush
Hush..Slip
faces dreaming of filth
pent up toxicant
Up Close
Stink ..Strut
mind fuck the muse
climb..calm....dawn
Naked Fright
alive tonight
patchouli's soft belly
Awake...aware..alone
I walk
without
walls
Nowhere
Now
To
Fall
Nothing ...can...touch..{.me}
Never Break..
Nothing Left
Naked
Shake..
........Stink
.......................Slip
{{Strut}}
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Copyright 2004 A Velvet Tongue
Published on Thursday, June 10, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Patchouli's Undercurrents..{Stink}+{Slip}+{Strut)"
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A former member wrote:
This is like one of those mind controlling things that let you see about 1,000 images all at once and your so mesmerized by the screen changing that you sit there for hours.
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On Thursday, June 17, 2004, girlafraid
(479)
wrote:
speechless...i'm inspired once again, vel..thanks
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On Thursday, June 10, 2004, aXe FactoR
(333) wrote:
a very creative piece, nice to read & interesting content. keeps me intrigued. awesome. -MeL-
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On Thursday, June 10, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
this was fun to read,as in trying to picture the scenes to the words, its really cleverly written, and brimming with style
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On Thursday, June 10, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
oh jesus ... woke me like a bucket of ice water {shake} + {toss} + {freeze} + {rattle} ... = that was a monster ... damn ... shivver , shivver ,.... thankyou ... funguy
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On Thursday, June 10, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
not done ... so authentic ... sculpture from memory ... structure fun , and playing with spotlit realities ... too , too cool ... funguy
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