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Rain Dancing
By sweetambrosia
Spinning in slow
circles
hair plastered to
face
rain streaming down
cheeks
a semblance of
tears
clinging to glittering
eyeslashes
wind singing sweet
melodies
upon her seashell
ear
her water music
tonight.
Clothes clinging to
body
enhancing full breasts
unbound
skirt flairing delicately
outward
slapping
against body
slickened.
Bare feet splash
dancing
within the puddles
formed
raising up on
tiptoes
to kiss full
moon
and gaze ever
upward
toward
crying skies
home
as she dances
on.
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Copyright 2004 Amber N. S. Hill
Published on Monday, April 12, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Rain Dancing"
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A former member wrote:
this really made me smile, great write
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A former member wrote:
*shakes head* I can't believe how amazing this trully is, my children will be reading your work in school...I would take up a whole page writing what is so great about this poem...+T.P.U+
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A former member wrote:
Seriously...+T.P.U+
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On Friday, April 16, 2004, Solace
(1069)
wrote:
Memories flash and dance within themselves, broken visions of a once joyous occasion, dancing in the rain for no reason. But for the rain itself, free abandon, love for nothing bu the love of love itself...
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A former member wrote:
I just say that I agree with all the commentors
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On Monday, April 12, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
I could see this girl as if I were staring at her through my window. An absolutely gorgeous write, so wistful and dream-like. ~L
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On Monday, April 12, 2004, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
this is a beautiful piece, lots of imagrey, i loved it.~~~Grave
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A former member wrote:
Well, i havn't read many of your works as of yet, but i will now. Heh, good job, its nice and simple.
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On Monday, April 12, 2004, flying_fox
(573) wrote:
ohhhhhhhhhhh lovely... lovely... sad and romantic...wonderful imagery as always. I hope I dream about this tonight... Fox
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A former member wrote:
dancing in the rain. *takes off clothes and runs outside* =( it doesnt rain here...only snow..
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On Monday, April 12, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
I can relate totaly.. I would love to get money writing stuff like this, just sitting behind a desk.. :O) you know I adore your talent... Monkey *hugs
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On Monday, April 12, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
i have a total weakness for 'dance' pieces... this is lovely... "clinging to glittering eyeslashes" is extra-fab, too. beautiful write. :)
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