Love you

By Drayvinio

You! Fucking love you.
Love you caustic and sadistically cruel.
Love you happy, pissed and everything there in.
Love you innocently sleeping in my bed
Love you covered in salt and sand
Love you not a second out of the shower
Love you against the wall
Love you even when you cower
Love you tired, dirty and spent
Love you till death and beyond

You and me, kid
On this day I swear
Love you enough to be true
Love you enough to never stray
Love you enough to be yours
Fucking love you always
Love only you

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Copyright 2004 Drayvinio
Published on Monday, April 5, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • AniDayz On Sunday, January 30, 2005, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    oooohhh...so many vivid descriptions. and a wonderful choice of words. i love this!

  • BeautifulCalamity On Friday, January 28, 2005, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    "Love you covered in salt and sand"... that line was just soaked in emotion, excellent work. This is how I wish someone looked at me , your talent is obvious :), and thanks for faving me and my poem :*

  • Beautiful Scars On Monday, April 5, 2004, Beautiful Scars (175)By person wrote:

    Its always good to love someone. -fairy-

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