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The battle within me
By Mistress Morbid
Sadness
Misery
My best friend
Torn
In two
Directions
What should
I do?
An angel
On one
Shoulder
A demon
On the
Other
Who should
I listen
To?
"She didn't
Mean to
Do it..."
"Yes she
Did
She hates
You,
Take
Revenge"
Shut up
Shut up
I don't
Know what
To do
"Forgive her..."
"Spit on
Her,
Make her
Feel insignificant"
My head
In my hands
Pounding
Throbbing
I can't
Do it
"It's ok,
Kindness
Is the
Best way..."
"Fuck that
Humiliate her,
Cut her
Down to
Size"
Tears blur
My vision
I shake
My head
NO!
I pound
My fists
On the mirror
Shattering it
All over
The floor
Bloodied hands
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Copyright 2004 Morbid Derangement
Published on Wednesday, March 24, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, March 25, 2004, flying_fox
(573)
wrote:
weighing up decisions is always a bitch, and this illustrates it so well. (I have to admit though I had visions of Smeegal and Golom from LOTR as your angel and demon...I am brainswashed by the media) Fox
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On Thursday, March 25, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
lol.....my precious.....haha
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A former member wrote:
I go through this a lot. I really wish I could find a happy middle zone and get the point across without being a prick. Usually I either come off as either a pushover or an asshole. Heh. You figure it out you lemme know, eh? ~Ship!
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A former member wrote:
I read it line for line at least 3 times, it's good ~*~*Stephanie~*~* AKA merciless_death
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On Wednesday, March 24, 2004, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
Pssh, I always knew you were crazy.
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On Wednesday, March 24, 2004, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
Hehe, seriously though, the last minute twist was like BAM. Kinda shocked me that you would be thinking bad things about yourself. I don't see why...
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On Wednesday, March 24, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
I didnt, at first I was writing it about someone else. I just thought, hmmm that would make have to look twice if I said it was me.
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