I don't care anymore

By Mistress Morbid

Im tired of always
trying to please everyone
but then never get anything
in return

Except

Maybe for me to go unnoticed
totally unaware
of all those
emotions bottle up inside

Clenching my fist
I've always
went out of my way
to be nice

Yet

You just turned your
back on me

Let me slip down

Dark
Nothing

That sits just below hades

Why should I worry
myself sick

Over

People
who
just
dont
care

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Copyright 2004 Morbid Derangement
Published on Wednesday, March 17, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • worm On Tuesday, August 29, 2017, worm (1149)By person wrote:

    come back and write again...

  • firecracker On Tuesday, February 9, 2010, firecracker (2)By person wrote:

    i can toatally understan i like its really good piece

  • A former member wrote: I like it. I can completely relate. Trust me. I only have 2 true friends and I'm going through some major struggle tryin not to try and be perfect. Well, in other words it's very good.

  • A former member wrote: nice i like it,, i can really relate

  • Lynaes On Friday, March 19, 2004, Lynaes (854)By person wrote:

    Oh, wow, I can deeply relate to this. Very deep and emotional. Awesome work, Morbid, I love it. ~L

  • OLd SouL On Thursday, March 18, 2004, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    It took me many years to learn this valuable lesson. There is a balance.. though tought to find. Its 'me first, you close second.' And a big middle finger for those who don't care. :) :::OLd

  • A former member wrote: It's hard not to care.. Clearly it affects you, and it will until you FINALLY learn not to care. Unfortunatly it's a difficult place to reach.. Maybe hang around senior citizens.. they know where it's at!

  • Loserland On Wednesday, March 17, 2004, Loserland (113)By person wrote:

    too true... feel the same way...the world's apathy takes up more space than it's oceans.

  • Mistress Morbid On Wednesday, March 17, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    And the ocean is vast in comparison

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