Blinded

By Mistress Morbid

Blinded by the sight of your beauty
I could never think of you as snooty
You could never comprehend my happiness
Although I'm taken away with that one kiss
But as fate would have it
The horrifying reality has hit
I'm surrounded in a flood
But I'm really drowning in my blood

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Copyright 2004 Morbid Derangement
Published on Thursday, February 26, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Mari On Tuesday, May 30, 2006, Mari (419)By person wrote:

    whoa i saw the lyrics on your page i love that song i used to listen to it but it depressed the hell out of me so i stopped anyhoo just wanted to say that

  • A former member wrote: The Mistress Files, 1st chronicle : drowns in blood, muahah, oh yes. tasty.

  • sixsixnine On Tuesday, June 8, 2004, sixsixnine (476)By person wrote:

    LOOOVED IT ! this is a really AWESOME PIECE *669*

  • knightmirror On Wednesday, April 7, 2004, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    yeah i'm gonna have to agree with tim and twilight.i have to admit it was short and sweet.knight

  • A former member wrote: The thought you express is excellent, I think you should ditch the rhymes and not force the piece to conform.

  • Lynaes On Thursday, March 18, 2004, Lynaes (854)By person wrote:

    Wow, that was a hard blow.. The wording and structure of this was so casual, but so shocking when you read the last lines. Fantastic work! ~L

  • Lynaes On Thursday, March 18, 2004, Lynaes (854)By person wrote:

    P.S, a special thanks to you too m'dear. I appreciate it your words also. :) ~L

  • Mistress Morbid On Thursday, March 11, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    Id like to think of this as staring at death herself, straight in the eyes....

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