Sweet Escape

By nightshade

Forgiving, forgetting
Forever, reliving
all the minutes,
all the seconds
constantly wounded
by your soul piercing weapons
the deceit, the lies
that break the family ties
my heart held together
by this thin line of love
my mind melted and crushed by hate
as i hear the drawing of swords
i look for an escape

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Copyright 2004 nightshade
Published on Monday, February 23, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • knightmirror On Wednesday, October 13, 2004, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    me likeylikey...-knight

  • Jaded Jezzabelle On Monday, March 1, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle (328)By person wrote:

    i can dig it...jaded

  • A former member wrote: "by this thin line of love" love that part and i like the first two lines

  • A former member wrote: I feel you here, too...gorgeous.

  • A former member wrote: nicely said.. =) i like it. im longing for my sweet escape.

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