Written
By sweetambrosia
Blood pounding drums upon ears ringing
breath quaking out of lungs
searing
hands shaking and eyes straining, tearing
all rushing
to meet a conclusion.
Candlelight flickering casting shadows
on walls
burning skin glowing firelight hues while darkness falls
sweat pouring, beading, pooling, as climax calls
finally finding
release.
Ink flowing, painting pictures with words
flowing
out, melting together, blurred
feverish, spilling, unable to be deterred
panting as it comes.
Cotton candy skies and incandescent
lies
Eyes wide in surprise and trembling thighs
reaching for
the prize and finally breath slowly dies
down as it all finds form.
Chest heaving, now spent and relaxing
body numbed as dawn
starts casting
rays upon the bed and all the lasting
images
he has created
Upon her body still glistening, shining
with ink and sweat, he looks on sighing
admiring his work as she
is lying
peacefully dreaming after a night fulfilled.
Comments on "Written"
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On Sunday, February 22, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Truly breathtaking... In a wierd way, you made me feel more like a whole person. Peter
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A former member wrote:
Yeah, I like this one very much. I liked your use of incandescent lies. I used that in a poem if I can find it somewhere. The pictures you painted with these were lovely. +T.P.U+
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A former member wrote:
with these words*
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On Thursday, February 5, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
Wow this was such a mixture of imagery and theme that i got lost as to where you were taking me...A mixture of subtle eroticism and art...What art is all about really :)
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A former member wrote:
"burning skin glowing firelight hues while darkness falls" Mmm very intense. Beautiful style. Love it. ~Wish Upon A Star
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A former member wrote:
Wow...I like it!!! ^_^!!
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On Thursday, February 5, 2004, Jedi_MindFuck
(244) wrote:
this was truly amazing. *picks jaw off of floor* the flow, the structure..i love this....ben.
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On Thursday, February 5, 2004, Drea
(1443) wrote:
i logged in just to comment on this. i have to agree with soul. this is breathtaking. this is a great write. very well done. ~Drea~
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On Thursday, February 5, 2004, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
Now that sweetheart... is breathtaking.. seems like a perfect compliment. I love it. :::OLd