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Enslaved
By Kinkypoptart
Looking at these chains of love
Restraining me to the floor
Once I was your "true soul mate"
But now i'm just your whore
You take me out of my cage once a day
And beat me with your whip
You take pleasure in my pain
While I take it in and bite my lip
I know I cannot stop you
You're more powerful than I
I could tell you that I love you and to let me go
But that would be a lie
You no longer believe me when I say it
So I get punished
You make me bleed
And put me away when you're finished
I'm so sorry I wont cry
I'll play your little game
We'll pretend its fun
While I plead and scream your name
I've come off my shelf once again
To bring your pleasure alive
I must escape your grasp somehow
Thats what it takes to survive
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Copyright 2004 Kinkypoptart
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On Tuesday, August 17, 2010, Riven Waker
(323)
wrote:
how incredibly intense - a work of absolute perfection
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On Saturday, March 10, 2007, prettydisgrace
(96) wrote:
this is great, your a truely talented writer,i enjoyed all your work ive read so far :)
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On Sunday, September 17, 2006, Bluegirl
(177) wrote:
ooh! I love it! Excellent work. Left me with a sense of doom.
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On Wednesday, April 26, 2006, BrokenButterflyWings
(33) wrote:
I like this... something about it...
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A former member wrote:
So this is what the "other" thinks...
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A former member wrote:
I like this but it seems a little odd that you would want to continue to play his sick games but hey whatever floats your boat or finds your lost remote
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A former member wrote:
me likey a lot
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A former member wrote:
what can i say? i love it..
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On Sunday, May 22, 2005, little butterfly
(36) wrote:
this is great self expression i like it a lot
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A former member wrote:
i don't really look like a leper ... i have pics on my yahoo account .. william_wraithe ... let's hope this poem isn't about your life ... the muse of suffering is tragedy in the making ..
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A former member wrote:
Oh god...I love that poem you are an awesome writer.
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On Saturday, May 14, 2005, Labitina
(37) wrote:
I really like this, it's a great write
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On Wednesday, May 11, 2005, Loneal
(86) wrote:
Very well done - you capture the emotion with your words very well! Keep up the great writing! ~Syn.Dark/L.
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On Saturday, April 30, 2005, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
talk about chain to a relationship well put
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On Saturday, April 16, 2005, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
Leaves us thirsting for more. I rather enjoy this work
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A former member wrote:
left me wanting more....keep writing...ill keep reading. - heather lynn
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On Thursday, February 5, 2004, OLd SouL
(734) wrote:
I just read all of your works and I liked this one the best so far. The flow needs a little fixing up ,but heck, its really hard to completely smooth out a poem. There are always a couple bumps. Perfectly flawd I'd like to think. :::OLd
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On Saturday, January 24, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
I like...and if the monkey leaves you comments and wants to read yor works..well yor in girlfriend...lol
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On Saturday, January 24, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
defanetly a dark poem in stile.. would like to read more of yours to see if you hold other kinds of poetry inside.. welcome to dp .. Monkey (knows you been ere for 9 or 10 days)
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