Darkness Falls

By Drayvinio

Darkness Falls
Tears escape
Life is remembered
Memories are cherished
Regrets are forgotten

Deeds left undone
Words left unsaid
Fears are faced

A dream ends
It matters not
As the last breath is taken
Darkness Falls



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Copyright 2004 Drayvinio
Published on Sunday, January 18, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Friday, September 9, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (358)By person wrote:

    ...if this is about the last moments of someone's life, where's the surge of emotions; the "flashing of an entire life in a split-second"? It's not bad, but I reckon it should've been more intense.

  • A former member wrote: That movie was weak but I enjoyed this poem. Your writing structure is quite interesting. The last stanza is intense. " A dream ends it matters not as the last breath is taken darkness falls " WOW congrats

  • Alanarchy On Monday, January 19, 2004, Alanarchy (1200)By person wrote:

    Yeah, and I thought that movie was lame. Still, not bad. disregarding the title this was a well written peice. Good work.

  • Rebel_Angel On Monday, January 19, 2004, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    This was ok.

  • A former member wrote: This is alright, a lot of people have used Darkness Falls as a title lately....+T.P.U+

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