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Darkness Falls
By Drayvinio
Darkness Falls
Tears escape
Life is remembered
Memories are cherished
Regrets are forgotten
Deeds left undone
Words left unsaid
Fears are faced
A dream ends
It matters not
As the last breath is taken
Darkness Falls
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Copyright 2004 Drayvinio
Published on Sunday, January 18, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Darkness Falls"
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On Friday, September 9, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(357)
wrote:
...if this is about the last moments of someone's life, where's the surge of emotions; the "flashing of an entire life in a split-second"? It's not bad, but I reckon it should've been more intense.
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A former member wrote:
That movie was weak but I enjoyed this poem. Your writing structure is quite interesting. The last stanza is intense. " A dream ends it matters not as the last breath is taken darkness falls " WOW congrats
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On Monday, January 19, 2004, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
Yeah, and I thought that movie was lame. Still, not bad. disregarding the title this was a well written peice. Good work.
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On Monday, January 19, 2004, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
This was ok.
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A former member wrote:
This is alright, a lot of people have used Darkness Falls as a title lately....+T.P.U+
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