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Insomniac's Dream
By Liath
Laying awake,
Can't sleep,
This sickness I can't shake,
It's 3 A.M...BEEP BEEP..
Insomniac's dreams,
A rested reality,
It's much nicer than it seems,
Sleep's divinity.
We take for granted,
Our reverie unconscious,
Eventually your conscience goes rancid,
Empty feeling in the pit of your stomach becomes noxious.
Staring at the ceiling,
Going crazy with boredom,
Dreaming of sleep's relieving,
Stuck in the doldrums.
The sun comes up and I can see the light,
Close is my short-lived liberation,
I am free again until the next night,
When I am held by night's condemnation.
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Copyright 2003 Liath
Published on Friday, December 19, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Insomniac's Dream"
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A former member wrote:
i can TRULY relate. you fear the night; see her as your enemy, even.
-Tab
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On Thursday, May 20, 2004, Anth
(1126)
wrote:
this is a great write, the best of your recent re posts, cleverly worded and i really love that second verse
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On Sunday, March 14, 2004, one-fanged vision
(7) wrote:
can definately relate. i like the last stanza. %fanged
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On Saturday, February 14, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
i've seen my share of sunrises liath ... good write ... funguy
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On Saturday, February 14, 2004, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
I like this, it is really good. Thanks for sharing.
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