Blood of Winter
By A Velvet Tongue
Blood of winter
stains the white
casting off
the frigid fright
moonlight splays
across the sheets
anartica's breath
the only heat
raindrops held
within the air
letting us know
winter's here
His blood thick
rich...sanguinary
into his mind
I long to tarry
Cool the boiling
the cauldrons hearth
blanketing all
a soft rebirth
one as he
melds with his title
sweet rarity
within to idle
into his veins
the darkness seeps
in arms of desire
I soundly sleep
each new year
the seasons grant
something new
to enchant
A dreamers orb
open wide
blood of winter
softly slides
crimson tears
coat his cheek
ever more
his soul to seek
let me hibernate
in snow dusted hills..
with blood of winter
freshly spilled...
{Dedicated to the special darkling, who few can match}
Blood of Winter...
Comments on "Blood of Winter"
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On Tuesday, December 14, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(384) wrote:
WOW this is amazing!~ss
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On Monday, June 28, 2004, aXe FactoR
(333) wrote:
a wonderful tribute to a wonderful person. dan sure deserves such words of beauty. this piece is rad & beautifully written. -MeL-
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On Friday, October 31, 2003, Drea
(1388) wrote:
...no words would be good enough vel.... just know i was here and it blew me way. ~Drea
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A former member wrote:
blood of winter softly slides, a soft rebirth stains the white, crimson tears
freshly spilled, each new year raindrops held; into his veins, I soundly sleep.
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A former member wrote:
"anartica's breath the only heat" there r many great lines in this poem, yet this is one of the most unique & original i've read in a long time. the oppossitions, like seasons and lovers, such an enigmatic thirst w/ the tongue u have.
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On Wednesday, October 29, 2003, Demosthenes
(155) wrote:
only words are (word is)... exactly. -B
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On Tuesday, October 28, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
You have convinced me over and over that you are a true poet...you can never fail in making a good write...and so this is another remarkable to my eyes.
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A former member wrote:
well said, mXXXy, and I very much agree with you... Vel has delicate & sensual beauty in her poetry...
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On Tuesday, October 28, 2003, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
M'Lady, I don't know what to say...I am not deserving of such eloquent words, you have melted my heart...I shall remember these words forever as the greatest compliment anyone has ever given to me, and yet again I am captivated by your elegance
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A former member wrote:
I loved the imagery, you made it dance in my imagination. Wonderful job. ~LoKi~
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On Monday, October 27, 2003, Silent_Raven
(19) wrote:
this is such a beautiful poem as usual with you, beautiful imagery...*RAVEN.*