Love...

By Mindless fairy

Life is all there is,
When love is not enough.
Your heart is truly his
And you pretend to be tough
You can't stand to live,
And you're afraid to die.
Your heart becomes sieve,
And all you do is cry.
He left you feeling hollow.
And you pray to God above
It hurts so much you can't swallow.
Just remember,
Nothing is more painful than true love.

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Copyright 2003 Mindless fairy
Published on Saturday, October 25, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I love this poem, You could really tell your wrote from you heart and I could feel your pain. Thanks for sharing :)

  • A former member wrote: I love it Emi that's exactly how i feel.

  • A former member wrote: i cant tell you how much i feel you on this poem, AWSOME write, keep it up.

  • Mindless fairy On Tuesday, October 28, 2003, Mindless fairy (8)By person wrote:

    this is one of my oldest works... i have so many that i kant find

  • A former member wrote: it will all work out in the end. welp, gotta go!

  • Exodus On Saturday, October 25, 2003, Exodus (172)By person wrote:

    Love sux..

  • A former member wrote: Good shiz, good flow and a better meaning. I really like this one.

  • yslehc On Saturday, October 25, 2003, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    amen.. great poem

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