Dying

By Mistress Shadow

Slowly old and cherished friendships
break and dwindle without knowing why.
Music which shaped all that lead
to those first steps shall no longer be created.
Things once loved are shadowed memories
while words roll from the tongue of them.
Mastered skills turn to those of
child scrawls leading to failure.
Depression is the name of the pond
and it seems I’m sinking slowly
to the dark some end.


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Copyright 2003 mistress_shadow
Published on Friday, October 3, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Ravenblade On Thursday, March 25, 2010, Ravenblade (307)By person wrote:

    This left me with a want for more, but the brevity of this is what was so beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

  • Cattarax On Wednesday, May 31, 2006, Cattarax (210)By person wrote:

    I know all about this ... it sux when the ones you used to turn to are the ones that are bringing you down

  • A former member wrote: take me with you, please, I want to drown in your words and gasp for air between you lines ;)

  • LiP Stiches On Friday, July 29, 2005, LiP Stiches (42)By person wrote:

    I really like how much depth this poem has....woo!

  • IceDragoness On Saturday, November 22, 2003, IceDragoness (193)By person wrote:

    I definately feel this... ~Dawn

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Thursday, October 30, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    mmm...a lot of friendships end...when people grow apart

  • KittyStryker On Friday, October 3, 2003, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    mm. i enjoy this... melancholy...

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