...Ode to the Offended--My Care...Rescinded

By SolApathy

A satire to the recent events this morning of DP... Everyone has their reasons for posting
comments or not posting comments on poems, attacking others because they get more comments than
you makes for a poor reflection of who you you are. And now a 10 minute poem that probably went a little too far!
But hey that's who we are...

An ode to the offended
I am a satire of those that aren’t yet mended
Broken words splaying across the page
Disjointed themes of cavernous rage?
Sweet images of a meatloaf ice-cream shake
Somehow these words just aren’t in the right place
Turning, I twist into the next spasm of vomit upon the world
Unable to quantify - - or imbue a coherent message to you
~What am I trying so hard to deliver~
Unable to compose —I become bitter
If only for a comment I would imbue a cascade of roses upon you
I’ll skewer you if your words make more sense than mine
In this talent-- I am sublime
I’m not a bloody angel, and my words don’t bleed with pain and pleasure
Give me a moment though
I’ll write a comment of immense displeasure!

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Published on Sunday, September 10, 2017. Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

...Is there anything left to say when someone writes a nasty comment upon another's page? - Keep it real, and if you are going to write a rant about someone you don't like that includes horrible imagery, and statements that are vile-Don't use full names

Comments on "...Ode to the Offended--My Care...Rescinded "

A former member wrote: Well said! I can't stand judgmental pricks! So many of them in the world...I was hoping this would be a sanctuary without that sort of child's play. I like the way u spat this at them...say it like it is, made me chuckle.
On Sunday, September 10, 2017, Allen (156) wrote:

Ill say this if you go to far we are coming for ya. Thanks Sol. Many dont have to use names to get the pic across. Anyhow glad you wrote this. Im not so nice if im gonna diss someone
A former member wrote: This is very spot on, dearest. As I said yesterday, I don't know what her problem with me is, and rather than lash out online, just send me a DP Mail so we can hash it out like adults. I have a lot more to say about this, but I'll just leave it at this for now. Amazing job as usual. Rebs:).