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She can.. She won't...
By veingo
She can feel it.
You know she can..
​Like a ghost-cold wind across her back
on a hell-hot summer day...
She can sense it.
​As everyone does..
Calm comfort of love grasping at her heels, as she walks defiant;
​squinting, yet still challenging the sun...
​She can hear them.
​And so, tunes them out..
His hopes, pleas, and prayers for her return.
​Fadeing like the patter of rain drops in a storm shower blown past...
An oasis behind her.
And a desert ahead..
But like the wife of Lot,
​she will never look back again...
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Copyright 2017 veingo
Published on Sunday, February 19, 2017.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "She can.. She won't..."
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On Friday, May 14, 2021, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703)
wrote:
I love the ending where she walks from the oasis towards the desert, vowing to never look back again. Great piece! Ciao, T/S
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On Tuesday, December 29, 2020, terris crimson
(169) wrote:
this is beautiful
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On Tuesday, July 10, 2018, Jonas Robinson
(867) wrote:
So emotional, yet with peaceful words. I like it.
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