Tears of Gray

By Crystal Passion

Tears of gray, tears of pain
they burn their stain into my cheek
but yet i wonder
why
tears of life, tears of joy
refresh my skin with their healing touch




my baron embrace, my empty heart
construct the confines of my mobile prison
but you cemented the walls together
my decision, my own undoing
destroy the prospects of a joyous reunion





I searched continuity in your adoration
you said youd love me hold me forever
and from my hunt, I came up short
and
discovered that
when you said you loved me
you meant fornever





Tears of life
Tears of pain
Tears of joy
Tears of gray

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Copyright 2003 Kryztal_Prizon
Published on Thursday, September 4, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: well, i have to say, this is very good. the way its written, whats was written...all of it! very nice.

  • _Andrew_ On Friday, September 5, 2003, _Andrew_ (245)By person wrote:

    you still dont see... *sigh* alas im the bad guy *~*aNDReW*~*

  • Blood of Winter On Friday, September 5, 2003, Blood of Winter (296)By person wrote:

    saddening, though I really like the ending.

  • A former member wrote: Now I know why you never smile. It's hard to smile. It's like having really dry skin, if you tense, it will crack a bloody smile full of pain.

  • urbanhumility On Thursday, September 4, 2003, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    first one i have read of yours, im impressed, your ecnomy of words, your well chosen words.......well done ......urban

  • Crystal Passion On Thursday, September 4, 2003, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    i am speachless...

  • A former member wrote: i like this poem

  • maddin foxxxy On Thursday, September 4, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    This had a calming effect on me, yet a sad one too...'tears they stain into my cheek'...i can only imagine ur pain inside.

  • worm On Thursday, September 4, 2003, worm (1194)By person wrote:

    kryztal... the tears we cry allow us to cleanse our hearts... or not! there is a certain sadness here... this was sung with a sweet voice! worm

  • A former member wrote: This is good stuff.

  • A former member wrote: that comment was just too small, i had to add something.. I like the flow, the lack of ryhme, or the minor amount that there was made this poem much stronger. And fornever, quite clever

  • Crystal Passion On Thursday, September 4, 2003, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    behind the tears you made me smile :)

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