Sweet Nothings

By drasticdaydreams

Pretty pretty princess
Dare to write a song.
Sing of hopes and dreams now
While innocence lives on.
Tell me I'm your only
Tell me I'm the one
The tears will fall in rivers
When we see
Twas only fun.

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Copyright 2014 drasticdaydreams
Published on Wednesday, November 19, 2014.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • MR feathered fox On Wednesday, February 1, 2017, MR feathered fox (28)By person wrote:

    A beautiful creation Simple yet piercing

  • drasticdaydreams On Monday, May 15, 2017, drasticdaydreams (55)By person wrote:

    Thank you.

  • bpathos On Thursday, November 20, 2014, bpathos (77)By person wrote:

    I liked this. It feels well crafted and is a stimulating read. Poetry "snapshots" are sometimes of places we've been, and sometimes not. Mostly this is a clear image. Well done, thank you.

  • soul_versing On Friday, October 24, 2014, soul_versing (774)By person wrote:

    Self made journeys, later on, defines our very gifts as philosophers. Beautiful piece, love♥ on a sidenote: welcome to the valley. Scholar

  • mindtrash On Monday, October 20, 2014, mindtrash (10)By person wrote:

    The end was razor sharp. Pretty cool

  • A former member wrote: Can't take everything too seriously. People get hurt because of it, but sometimes we can't be on the same page.

  • drasticdaydreams On Monday, October 20, 2014, drasticdaydreams (55)By person wrote:

    Perhaps we shouldn't take it all too seriously, but it can be rather easy to. I'm not saying it doesn't make it worth it, Thanks for comment :)

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