Graffiti Prophet

By bpathos

From my window in the faces
As my bus drove other places
The graffiti prophet spoke
A gentle sermon in his joke
 
It’s not the questions, if you cry
It’s all the notions that are why
The passions of the moment pass
And so what’s left is so what lasts
 
Life flowed past the tinted window
Down a list of city noises groaned
Emptiness was my reflection there
And so to it my questions were
 
Speak some truth my public fool
Stand and make or break a rule
Share my head some ones and zeros
Show my heart romance and heroes
 
The river’s not too fast or so it seems
To stop the really mighty dreams
You don’t think the rivers wide
Till you need the other side
 
History shows in life’s attrition
Reality’s not just strong suspicion
So Plato’s light did come and fall
And throw the shadows on my wall
 
Rust and rot on gossamer wings
Dwarfs and Elves with magic rings
A smell of life a taste of time
Nine cents missing from my dime
 
Women bite and whiskey stings
All the bitters sweet can bring
500 channels in the sky
Showing us the vein’s run dry
 
Saw it through the chain link
Tween the crack and boards
Heard it on the radio
Tween the minor chords

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© 2007 bpathos
Published on Sunday, September 23, 2007.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Lyrics"
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  • dwells On Saturday, January 26, 2019, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Liked how this was emphasized by an uneven metrical pattern BP. At first a bit disoriented but then realized it was done to highlight or accentuate the text and not lull the reader with a singsong tome of forced rhymes. Cheers and well done for these perceptive thoughts my friend and cheers! - Dan

  • drasticdaydreams On Wednesday, October 22, 2014, drasticdaydreams (55)By person wrote:

    It brings a feeling of something well hidden, yet just about showing... as if you almost have all the pieces to the puzzle of life. Oh the verses are delicious. I'm terribly curious, what meaning did you intend to put across here ?

  • drasticdaydreams On Wednesday, October 22, 2014, drasticdaydreams (55)By person wrote:

    And are you not able to bookmark pieces as a trial member ? Because this is the most intriguing piece I've come across so far.

  • urbanhumility On Sunday, September 23, 2007, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    absoutly brilliant, abstract, articulate, fluid.....intelligent.......poetry incarnate!

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