Comments by MR feathered fox
- "Beautiful poem about
life, rebirth, & balance,
Askew & anew
Made me think of unbalanced
And balanced
This conveys yin & yang
(leaving) a dying past
For a new future life
A break up poem and baby birth
Fused in one brilliant write
Way to use the left & right brain....
"
Posted by MR feathered fox on "LIFE UPROOTED " by motherofnature
- "My soul,
peeps threw holes,
With Hazel halo's,
(dilated) at this poem,
So if I die today,
I will (die elated),
Beautiful write vividly wrote ....
I rate it a 10"
Posted by MR feathered fox on "...Brunette Monet " by SolApathy
- "
it wasn't what we thought
we were on the wrong track.
there's trains headed for a head on collision.
and the controller asleep in the booth.
and soon the will crash... crash and shatter like glass
shattered children and shattered futures for our youth.
Nice barz
Vividly written"
Posted by MR feathered fox on "millennium got you" by cogitative
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