I'm Invisible to the World

By megaprime81

No one sees me
I'm invisible
A light that burned out
A soul got turned out
No one sees me anymore

I'm invisible
I've disappeared from sight
Once was i arrogant
And now i'm deflated
Pride is destructive

How much more can i say?
How much more can i write?
When you've disappeared,
I guess it matters not
Cuz it all just turns to rot
In the end

 

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Copyright 2014 megaprime81
Published on Tuesday, March 4, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Right now, this is my mood. I feel invisible and worthless.
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  • blue angel On Tuesday, March 4, 2014, blue angel (877)By person wrote:

    This theory is widespread, I recall those same words from a person close to me that felt the same way. And at times it seemed to ring true.. I think it happens when we fall out of our groove... or maybe just a touch of paranoia :) nice ponder/reflecting *

  • megaprime81 On Tuesday, March 4, 2014, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    Ihank you, Sweet angel, you always know how to comfort me. :-)

  • A former member wrote: I relate to the first stanza so much sometimes I feel like a destitute ghost, loved the write

  • megaprime81 On Tuesday, March 4, 2014, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    That's how i feel right now--like a ghost, but i decided i'd just leave that thought out. Seems it worked out for the better, in that it still was implied, even though it wasn't explicitly stated. Thank you.


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