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Winter's Lies
By megaprime81
Can you see/The snow is whipping and twirling/Getting in my eyes/Can't see you/Can't see anything/My feet are on fire/And my hands are in deep freeze/Can't see where I'm going/Can't see anything/Everything's turning white/I'm drifting in the snow/It's a desert as cold as Antarctica/I tear off my clothes/And fall to the ground/It envelopes me, freeze-burning my skin/Naked and alone,/I am no more/I thought the frost giants would protect me/How foolish a notion/I'm alone and perishing in frigid fire and chilling coals/White is the color of the skies/White is the ocean of dire fate/No more can I feel/For it's too late.
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Copyright 2014 megaprime81
Published on Thursday, February 13, 2014.
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"Poetry"
Author's Note:
Possible alternate title: Ice-olation.Comments on "Winter's Lies"
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On Friday, February 14, 2014, PoetessDarkly
(700)
wrote:
awesome write MP, you rock at writing
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On Tuesday, February 25, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Thank you.
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On Thursday, February 13, 2014, blue angel
(877) wrote:
The snowy images are so vivid, and the emotions are deeply felt. I love how you pull me out into this wintry torment. Nice write!! 10
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On Thursday, February 13, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
I owe Peter Steele, in part; check out the lyrics for "Too Late: Frozen", which i used the idea of frost giants from. Also, listen carefully at the beginning; you'll hear a mistake, "Ha ha ha, you suck!" "Fuck you!". There's some other hidden stuff in some of Type O's work...
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