Dispayre
By megaprime81
Fall
Down
Get
Up
Lay
Down
Get
Up
Stand
Still
Sit
Down
Shut
Up
You
Cut
Up
Or
Else
You
Will
Pay
Wake
Up
And
Stay
Up
Or
You
Will
Regret
It.
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Copyright 2014 megaprime81
Published on Tuesday, February 11, 2014.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
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A former member wrote:
I love the multiple meanings that can be deciphered behind the poem, even though there's one true meaning. Well written.
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On Tuesday, February 11, 2014, blue angel
(866) wrote:
interesting and simplistic ~ striking in me the rituals of numbing daily regiments . Nice :)
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A former member wrote:
I really liked the way you put this together. Thanks for sharing
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On Tuesday, February 11, 2014, megaprime81
(740) wrote:
Thank you; I appreciate your comments.
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On Tuesday, February 11, 2014, BloodyMercy
(64) wrote:
Very linear..very quick... Seemed defined. I liked it.
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On Tuesday, February 11, 2014, megaprime81
(740) wrote:
Thank you; I appreciate the kind words.