Dispayre

By megaprime81

Fall
Down
Get
Up
Lay
Down
Get
Up
Stand
Still
Sit
Down
Shut
Up
You
Cut
Up
Or 
Else
You
Will
Pay
Wake 
Up
And 
Stay 
Up
Or
You
Will 
Regret 
It.

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Copyright 2014 megaprime81
Published on Tuesday, February 11, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"

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  • A former member wrote: I love the multiple meanings that can be deciphered behind the poem, even though there's one true meaning. Well written.

  • blue angel On Tuesday, February 11, 2014, blue angel (866)By person wrote:

    interesting and simplistic ~ striking in me the rituals of numbing daily regiments . Nice :)

  • A former member wrote: I really liked the way you put this together. Thanks for sharing

  • megaprime81 On Tuesday, February 11, 2014, megaprime81 (740)By person wrote:

    Thank you; I appreciate your comments.

  • BloodyMercy On Tuesday, February 11, 2014, BloodyMercy (64)By person wrote:

    Very linear..very quick... Seemed defined. I liked it.

  • megaprime81 On Tuesday, February 11, 2014, megaprime81 (740)By person wrote:

    Thank you; I appreciate the kind words.


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