Overlooking the View

By megaprime81

Sonar and radar
Check for a pulse
But can find nothing
The hour of request 
Befilled its second guest
And the atmosphere
Evaportated in his presence

Searching the sea
In black and red and blue
Sweetest ignorance
Has filled the ship's sails
Overlooking the view

Atop a cliff
A man observes
But sees nothing
The eyes he has now
Are covered with oysters
And are opaque 
As the jackel howls in delight

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Copyright 2014 megaprime81
Published on Tuesday, February 11, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

This is a poem that i hope turned out all right.
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  • blue angel On Tuesday, February 11, 2014, blue angel (877)By person wrote:

    This is obscure and visually entertaining .. I enjoy the depth of it. Yet, it has that disturbing factor too.. well done :)~

  • A former member wrote: I loved the last stanza. Hope to read more


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