I'll dance with you

By Deathkitten

We dance in heat
through pouring rain
You take away
every ounce of pain
Can't feel the old
deep scars or wounds
You reach into me
The stars doth move
Fill my soul
with light so bright
I'll dance with you
in the endless night
Press your kiss
through my chest
into my heart
You're the best
Eternally yours
We shall never part

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Published on Friday, September 20, 2013. Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Don't look down!

Comments on "I'll dance with you"

On Wednesday, March 30, 2016, carlosjackal (2787) wrote:

Wonderful rhyme cascade that suited the title brilliantly. Great stuff.
On Sunday, January 26, 2014, BloodyMercy (64) wrote:

This is quite the mixture of dark and light; it was definitely enjoyable. I appreciate the emotion tied ot the obvious feelings of intamacy... my take anyway.
A former member wrote: Aha I imagine you wrote this with a smile on your face, has a very happy feel to it that is quite refreshing.
On Friday, September 20, 2013, dwells (4177) wrote:

Fear of heights or possibly an inferiority complex? Recommended reading "Banana Hammock" that I posted last year, cheers and well constructed tribute, especially the heart kiss!
On Friday, September 20, 2013, blue angel (866) wrote:

Strikingly lovely, Kitten :)~