*=Satisfy Me=*
By Deathkitten
Honored
Oh, I sure am
that your thoughts
stand downwind
gathering false imagery
& feeling
as I sit back & grin
The meter kept running
Acidic rain has taken such toll
on all you wanted
All that glowed
& how it did slow
into a gradual end
"Why?", you ask
as if i'd give in
A theological quip
will not alter my nature
Are you now super-pious?
A god is a god
I am my own
but I beg not
of you
to devote
hypocritical
& meaningless time
to me
I need no worship
to be my own
There will be followers
even when you are gone
& karma will call on you
to drag you home
No need of worries
or fake obligation
I'd change you not
to keep you
stuck in your ways
So you can suffer
what pain
you thought I felt
& hollow out
into a voidful pit
Go back to your eyes
to rely on what you see
Read the lies
& criticize me
because it's all you have
& i'll let that be
Your unaccented slur
has no meaning
You can try
to analyze the verse
but please
don't worship me
because i'll be your curse
as you slowly satisfy me
Author's Note:
Get off your knees!Comments on "*=Satisfy Me=*"
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A former member wrote:
Hmm this strikes me more as being exasperation than rage. Something I can relate to. Regardless this is skillfully put together and reads so very smoothly.
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Get that pudwhacker to make his mind up (or possibly pudwhackeress) and get with the program before you die of boredom! Cheers Jess!!
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
Ahaha try & try again huh thanks, Dan ;)
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, darkheartmagic
(81) wrote:
Wow this is an outstanding piece of work.
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
Thank you so much, darkheart :)
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...yes, see w/your eyes, instead of by faith alone. that's a logical concept...
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
Yes indeed. Hope there's no hallucinations. Thanks, Faded.
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, haunted
(837) wrote:
awesome jess, another great poem. its the perfect rant and I loved reading it. groovy! lol.
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
It's not a rant. What is up with *sighs* thank you for reading, Todd. Glad ya liked it!
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose
(175) wrote:
damn the venom you have spewed from you mouth or rage. Ha i know where you are coming from on this one. Let your mouth poison the waters baby. Excellent
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
I wouldn't really categorize this as "rage", though one may believe it is, it is in lite form. Thank you so very much, Nikki :)
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, blue angel
(866) wrote:
"I need no worship to be on my own.. There will be followers even when you are gone" ~spitfire and save matches, damn girl... You bite the bullet and grin:)~ love this very much !!
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
"To be my own". Thanks!
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
A bit of rage? .. i think i felt something move down there. mmmmmmmm.. knees is my favorite position..
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
Yeah, sure. Give me a room full of metal chairs & plenty space ;)