*=Satisfy Me=*

By Deathkitten

Honored
Oh, I sure am
that your thoughts
stand downwind
gathering false imagery
& feeling
as I sit back & grin
The meter kept running
Acidic rain has taken such toll
on all you wanted
All that glowed
& how it did slow
into a gradual end
"Why?", you ask
as if i'd give in
A theological quip
will not alter my nature
Are you now super-pious?
A god is a god
I am my own
but I beg not
of you
to devote
hypocritical
& meaningless time
to me
I need no worship
to be my own
There will be followers
even when you are gone
& karma will call on you
to drag you home
No need of worries
or fake obligation
I'd change you not
to keep you
stuck in your ways
So you can suffer
what pain
you thought I felt
& hollow out
into a voidful pit
Go back to your eyes
to rely on what you see
Read the lies
& criticize me
because it's all you have
& i'll let that be
Your unaccented slur
has no meaning
You can try
to analyze the verse
but please
don't worship me
because i'll be your curse
as you slowly satisfy me

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Copyright 2013 Deathkitten
Published on Saturday, August 3, 2013.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

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  • A former member wrote: Hmm this strikes me more as being exasperation than rage. Something I can relate to. Regardless this is skillfully put together and reads so very smoothly.

  • dwells On Saturday, August 3, 2013, dwells (4288)By person wrote:

    Get that pudwhacker to make his mind up (or possibly pudwhackeress) and get with the program before you die of boredom! Cheers Jess!!

  • Deathkitten On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Deathkitten (573)By person wrote:

    Ahaha try & try again huh thanks, Dan ;)

  • darkheartmagic On Saturday, August 3, 2013, darkheartmagic (82)By person wrote:

    Wow this is an outstanding piece of work.

  • Deathkitten On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Deathkitten (573)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much, darkheart :)

  • FadedBlues On Saturday, August 3, 2013, FadedBlues (2172)By person wrote:

    ...yes, see w/your eyes, instead of by faith alone. that's a logical concept...

  • Deathkitten On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Deathkitten (573)By person wrote:

    Yes indeed. Hope there's no hallucinations. Thanks, Faded.

  • haunted On Saturday, August 3, 2013, haunted (851)By person wrote:

    awesome jess, another great poem. its the perfect rant and I loved reading it. groovy! lol.

  • Deathkitten On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Deathkitten (573)By person wrote:

    It's not a rant. What is up with *sighs* thank you for reading, Todd. Glad ya liked it!

  • BlackVelvet Rose On Saturday, August 3, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose (175)By person wrote:

    damn the venom you have spewed from you mouth or rage. Ha i know where you are coming from on this one. Let your mouth poison the waters baby. Excellent Scholar

  • Deathkitten On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Deathkitten (573)By person wrote:

    I wouldn't really categorize this as "rage", though one may believe it is, it is in lite form. Thank you so very much, Nikki :)

  • blue angel On Saturday, August 3, 2013, blue angel (877)By person wrote:

    "I need no worship to be on my own.. There will be followers even when you are gone" ~spitfire and save matches, damn girl... You bite the bullet and grin:)~ love this very much !!

  • Deathkitten On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Deathkitten (573)By person wrote:

    "To be my own". Thanks!

  • Devilish On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Devilish (2662)By person wrote:

    A bit of rage? .. i think i felt something move down there. mmmmmmmm.. knees is my favorite position.. Scholar

  • Deathkitten On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Deathkitten (573)By person wrote:

    Yeah, sure. Give me a room full of metal chairs & plenty space ;)

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