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[Pain_is_God]
By Deathkitten
Pain is god
The suffering
and intolerable
unpleasant
torture
The very meaning
of the word
Pain
The shifting agony
wallowing beneath
your skin
Under layers
still fortunately intact
Cringing with fear
afraid of the rise
to another level
of intensity
before death
that has you squirming
but pain is god
and it lets you know
you're not dead yet
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Copyright 2013 Deathkitten
Published on Sunday, June 23, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Saturday, June 29, 2013, NarcissusNarcosis
(94)
wrote:
The title says it all..."and it lets you know, you're not dead yet..." perfect portrayal. True poetic skill used on a great topic. Love it, awesome post
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A former member wrote:
Yes, that is true, God can endure the most pain but also the most peace to you. I really like this :)
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On Tuesday, June 25, 2013, haunted
(850) wrote:
yeah im pretty convinced this sounds exactly what I felt like when I got my thick ass nose pierced! that shit hurt! next time i'll get the deluxe piercing that comes with a hand job for the pain. I think pleasure is an excellent way to remedy it as its being delivered. awesome poem jess!
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On Monday, June 24, 2013, dwells
(4285) wrote:
I guess I got close to God then yesterday when I woke up with a big head from a fishing trip. Like they say, at first I thought I'd die, and then later afraid that I wouldn't! Cheers Jess!
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On Monday, June 24, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Catch anything for me?
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On Thursday, June 27, 2013, dwells
(4285) wrote:
One too small dolphin and a bonito for snapper bait, cheers!
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On Monday, June 24, 2013, blue angel
(877) wrote:
I love pain as long it doesn't hurt, lol ~ another powerful penning from you , jess ;) xxx
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On Monday, June 24, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
As long as it doesn't hurt? Pft mmkay. Thanks, Kendra.
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A former member wrote:
Sigh* Not many things on this Earth I love more than pain, and you're correct it certainly does remind us that we are alive. Really enjoyed this one.
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On Monday, June 24, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Mhmm thank you, Cameron :)
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A former member wrote:
It's nice to see a new poem from you, albeit a painful one. You've really made me feel this one. A good writing.
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On Monday, June 24, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Thanks! There's actually been a few new ones, you just missed them. Glad you could feel it.
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